Woah! That was a huge unexpected twist of events, in fact there were several. I thought a baby was a big enough shock, but twins? And I really like the way you're beginning to explore John's darker side, so far in all the fics I've read he's been happy so it's a good change! Please update soon =D
Author's Response: Yeah, I thought it was about time we took a look into John's darker side and put some angst into the story... Doesn't always have to be sunshine and happiness all over the place, right? ;^) Will update soon!
Oh I do so hope that you will have a new chapter up soon. This is a very nice anc charming story.
Author's Response: New chapter won't take that long... normally... Glad you like it!
Aaaaah the cultural references! Elizabeth and John together would raise morale, that's part of my personal canon. Keep going!
Author's Response: Yes, they would raise morale... I'm 100% sure off that too!
lol nice =D More, please! Very fluffy (in my eyes anyway) good job !
Author's Response: Thx and there will be more :^)
Wow nice one Kris, again I'm really enjoying this! Can't wait to follow the chapters through and I'll be sure to review every single one lol ;)
Author's Response: glad you're enjoying it again :^)rnI hope I can live up to your expectations ;^)
I'm still enjoying this. Keep it going!
Author's Response: Glad you're enjoying it. And I will keep it going :^)
NICE!
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really great story! cant wait to read the rest of it!
thanks for writing!!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you! chapter 2 will be posted in a few minutes!
Very good start. Very easy to picture the scenes with the children esp a boy with his hair and her eyes. Looking forward to chapter 2
Author's Response: Thank you! Chapter 2 should be up tomorrow.