I love this story! Please update soon, please!
Author's Response: Thx and I am working on the conclusion. My muse is just sorta leaving me on my own... Bad Muse!!
PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
the suspense is killing me...
Author's Response: *headdesk*
I'm so sorry... I've been so busy with personal things and other stories (blame the bunnies that keep attacking me) that this story sort off dissapeared into the background. I swear I'll get it finished and I'll try to update asap!
I am completely hooked on your wonderful story! Am eagerly waiting for your updates!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'll try to update asap.
I'm almost in shock... Poor Elizabeth, she just wants to bethere for him and he's acting like a jerk. Can someone 'just slap John in his face or so.. What's wrong with him!
I'm still hoping for a happy ending. ;-)
Author's Response: Thx for the review! And I hate bad endings, so no worries about that ;^)
What a lovely and caring story so far. I'm going to look forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you! Let me know what you think of the rest ;^)
NICE!
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really great story! cant wait to read the rest of it!
thanks for writing!!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you! chapter 2 will be posted in a few minutes!
Very good start. Very easy to picture the scenes with the children esp a boy with his hair and her eyes. Looking forward to chapter 2
Author's Response: Thank you! Chapter 2 should be up tomorrow.