I always felt that John needed to show a bit more remorse for leaving Elizabeth behind - for not saving her when he saved so many others. The show was never the same for me after what they did to Weir so I say 'thank goodness' for fabulous fanfic like yours!
Tears of loss just kept coming down.
You did a great job expressing John's feelings. I wish you had written more
SGA fan fics. You are excellent. If only TPTB would bring her back in the movies. They need her to complete the team. The original SGA leaders were the best.
Please no Woosley or Carter.
Aww thats really said =( I miss Elizabeth on the show, so I enjoy the 'thoughts unspoken' kind of fic's... Good job, 10 stars =)
Beautiful. Very nice way to put his feelings into words.