Reviewer: Anuna Signed Date: July 09, 2007 - 01:32 pm Title: Chapter 2 - An Innocent Invitation. Part I

Wow!! I really really love this! I'm very intrigued how this goes on, can't wait to read about the wedding, to find out who was on the phone with John in last chapter, and Jack is my absolute hero in this chapter!

Oh and I love the friendship between Elizabeth and Sam. I felt great while I read it - it was just like having a coffee with my best friend, it brought that feeling to me. When she's back from her vacation i'm gonna make her read this fic.

Keep up please!!!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your nice review! I'm glad you like the story and the friendship between Sam, Jack and Elizabeth! It is very important to me and I love to write such scenes between true friends. I hope I can update soon :-)

Reviewer: keia Signed Date: July 09, 2007 - 01:00 pm Title: Chapter 2 - An Innocent Invitation. Part I

Great story, nice angle on the characters.
Love the line "I’m-so -cute-and-innocent-and-you-hurt-me-nevertheless-face "

Author's Response: thank you! I think Jack's face is made for that face! :-)))

Reviewer: Babalouie Signed Date: July 08, 2007 - 11:19 am Title: Chapter 2 - An Innocent Invitation. Part I

Nice chapter, please don't keep us waiting long for the next chapter.

Author's Response: thanks! I'll try my best to update soon :-)

Reviewer: Steph7085 Signed Date: July 08, 2007 - 03:04 am Title: Chapter 2 - An Innocent Invitation. Part I

Great chapter!

Author's Response: thanks for your review, glad you like the story!

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