Finally a new chapter! This was great. I can't wait to see what happens next. Please hurry with the next chapter.
FINALLY someone fixed this site!! Excellent chapter. I hope Heightmeyer survives this. Please hurry with the next chapter.
It's going to be interesting to see how Elizabeth deals with "Doppleganger". Please don't make me wait so long for the next chapter.
Love this chapter!
FINALLY!! I've been waiting months for this! Hopefully they'll have a happily ever after. Love this story. Please hurry with the next chapter.
MUCH better than canon. You should have written for the show. It would probably still be on.
OMG you FINALLY updated!! I thought you'd died or something. These new chapters are awesome! I can't wait to read the next chapter so PLEASE don't make me wait long.
Author's Response: RL's been busy lately, but I can assure you that I aim to have the next chapter up soon (Although you can understand that I want to make SURE I get this next bit right)
I'm glad you changed the ending so that Elizabeth didn't get injured. Although from the tidbits you sent me months ago I was under the impression that John would save her from that in this chapter. Please don't make me wait so long for the next one because I want to know how John saves her life.
Author's Response: They've dealt with the threat of the attack, but that still leaves the threat of penetrating Asuras to overcome...
Great chapter! Please please PLEASE update this BEFORE the end of October (or at least before the end of the first week in November). The suspense is killing me!
Good chapter, although I was hoping it would be a lot longer. You're killing me here with the suspense. PLEASE don't make me wait for the next chapter.
FINALLY! I thought you'd given up on this story. Excellent chapter. Please don't make me wait so long for the next one because I'm going to die if I have to wait months for the anticipated event!
Author's Response: It's just hard to find the time to work on all of my current projects, but I can assure you I have no intention of abandoning this story.
OMG you FINALLY updated!! Good chapters. Please don't make me wait so long for the next one.
I don't remember what this episode was originally about but you did a good job here. Please update quickly, and could you please remove the spam comments? They're annoying and distracting.
I hope the shield prevented Beckett from being infected. This is a great chapter. So Carson's surviving should make for some interesting changes in the future. Please don't make me wait so long for chapter 10.
Author's Response: There's no evidence that the tumours themselves were 'contagious', so he's safe, I assure you. I'll do what I can on the update front.
Well it certainly will have long term consequences now that Koyla is being kept alive. Good chapter. Please don't make me wait so long for the next one.
Great chapter. Still hate Lucius. Can't wait to see Koyla killed off (assuming you don't change that).
OMG you FINALLY updated! I don't remember if this chapter was an episode on the show but you did a very good job here. Please don't make me wait so long for the next chapter.
I'm loving this story more and more. Please don't make me wait so long for the next chapter.
Excellent chapter. I hope Koyla doesn't find out John's the Phantom. Please update quickly.
I still wonder how these people knew who John was. I know what episode this chapter is based on but there's no way Koyla should have known about John being the Phantom. Please update very soon. & merry Xmas!
Author's Response: For the record, he doesn't know John's the Phantom; he thinks John is just a high-ranking new member of the Atlantis military. Hope you enjoy what's coming up.
Oh man, how did she know he was the Phantom? Or did she? If her brother was killed by the Phantom it's a safe bet that it was either an accident or he was a Wraith worshipper. Please update quickly.
Author's Response: Actually, she doesn't know John's the Phantom; she's just targeting a high-ranking member of the Atlantis expedition.
As for your comment about why the Phantom may have killed her brother... just think about what notable episode took place this season involving someone being captured by someone, and you may work out what's coming up next...
Wasn't it already established in the last story that John is NOT a Wraithspawn? There's no reason for Teyla & Ronon to be uncomfortable around him.
Author's Response: They've spent their lives believing that anything that looks like John is basically an animal that may interpret anything as an attack; that kind of habit is hard to break.
Couldn't they use artificial skin to replace the skin John lost?
Author's Response: My reasoning is that the damage has mostly healed over by now, so there just isn't any real way for them to connect the artificial skin to his own face, particularly since the injury happened when he was still growing and has therefore changed even further since then.
John needs to stop assuming that Elizabeth will never have any feelings for him. He can't know that Elizabeth could never love him unless he asks her. As for Ronon & Teyla & the rest, I guess it will take time to get them to trust him, but considering how much he's helped them for the past 2 years they all should have learned to trust him by now. I can't wait to see what happens next. Please hurry with the next chapter.
Author's Response: John's just convinced himself that Elizabeth can't feel that way about him for so long that it's hard to break the habit; it's going to take some drastic moments to make him admit the truth...
Ronon and Teyla are just naturally uncomfortable around a Wraithspawn, and everyone else is uncertain about the man in the mask they know so little about.
OMG FINALLY!! Thank you for finally updating! I totally agree with your "dragging out John & Elizabeth's relationship" as you put it. It's still too soon. On another note, I don't understand why plastic surgery would be impractical for John. With all the alien technology the SGC has acquired over the years, as well as US medial advances, why wouldn't doctors be able to fix John's face? This continues to be a great story. Please hurry with the next chapter.
Author's Response: The basic problem is that there's too much damage to what remains of his face; there just isn't enough flesh left for them to be able to remould it into a more 'appealing' appearance, and the damage is too old for most healing technology to work (Assuming that it WOULD work considering that John technically wasn't 'injured', but just lost data while being teleported).
That said, glad you liked it; hope the sequel continues to interest you.