You need to continue this story. This is great, but it feels incomplete.
WOW. That was amazing. I am so shocked no one has reviewed this moving story. Great job. I could feel their love and desperation. Without Elizabeth John is just not John. She truly completed him.
I Love this story so much! Its really sweet and realistic too, you get a lot of stories that are good but you know they would never really happen. You write the characters perfectly. Great job! ^_^
I liked that. The hurt/comfort was balanced very well. I'd like to see more from you, because from this you have a lot of potential. =) *salute*
Hurt and comfort at its best! Love it!
Author's Response: XD Thank you, thank you! I'm glad you liked it! More to come! ;)