Really Really good story!
Aww!!! I really liked this~!
A beautiful night to remember
I loved the romantic John
I'm normally not that much into fully AU stories, but I absolutely LOVE this one :^)
Author's Response: Thank you :)
Wow, Simon hits her! I can't believe Liz stayed with him when he hits her! Couldn't she have found a better guy she doesn't love as her boyfriend before she met John? lol I bet John will be so furious he'll show up at Simon's and knock him out! ^^ Liz's mother needs to keep her nose out of her daughter's business where it doesn't belong. I look forward to the drama of next chapter!
Uh oh, caught in the act! Before that though, John sure is quite the ladies' man. After all, he knew all the right things to say. Not to mention all the right things to do. ;) hehe I love how the story is going so far and I look forward to the confrontation next chapter.
Talk about romantic! *melts into a puddle* John Sheppard is just amazingly romantic in this story and it makes me want to melt into a puddle, lol. You write their relationship very well. This AU is unique too and I'm sure there'll be more info on the characters as I read more into the series. All I can say is that I encourage you to keep writing! ^^
Author's Response: unfortunatly, this series has stalled for a while... if you have any ideas or words of encouragement when you've finished all three stories then please let me know :)
At least now John is open to meeting and hearing Liz's explanation personally. Poor guy, she must've broken his heart when she stood him up even if it was beyond her control. She knew it too and I was glad to see that she put so much effort into trying to make it up to him. Colin really is a good friend to them both! Can't wait to see what happens next.
Interesting start! Liz's Mom is such a busybody and I hope Liz can sneak out from under her clutches long enough to date John, heh. I'm also interested to find out more about this AU John and Liz. ^^ I'll keep reading. ;)
Author's Response: Thanks, its nice to know that the first chapter is interesting enough and you'll find her mom becomes more than just a bussybody. Can't wait for more feedback from you.
hehe cool. i like how ur incorporating it into the show.. :)
Excellent! I love it.
I love this chapter! Elizabeth standing up for herself is always fantastic. I hope John comes back soon.
I'm really enjoying this series! Looking forward to more chapters! :D
Ohhh, I missed this serie!!!!
Thanks! Nice work, I can't wait for John coming back to Elizabeth and together saying something to her mom that she earned! :(
Update soon, please! :)
i love it!! it's romantical, but i was i bit confuse, is this story related to chances meetings and trapped?
Author's Response: Yes, at the end of trapped John was sent on this mission.
Go Elizabeth! Amazing story so far, I really cant wait for the rest!
More please? Lizzie's finally standing up for herself. Great!
YES! GO ELIZABETH!
I completely love this chapter, and Elizabeth was amazing!
I can't wait for the next chapter, this is so exciting!
wow! spiteful! i like it!
awww! sweet! very romantic
That was definetlely a great chapter. Sweet and real. Look forward to the next one! :)
Ooo...Elizabeth's mom is evil. Don't know why, but for some reason I thought Elizabeth was younger...
Way to choose John over money!