Ha, I'm back. :) You've definitely improved. You should be very proud of yourself. I'm not too picky on how they are a bit out of character, but it's great. Keep going, I'm eager for the last chapter now. :) *salute* s

Author's Response: I was wondering when i would hear from you again =).Thankyou for reviewing sorry about the out of character thing i will have to watch a bit of stargate atlantis again. The last chapter is up it isnt a big bang but i hope you enjoy it!