How do you do it? i just read chapter 11 and fell in love with all your scenes. The one with IOA was priceless and I couldn't help but laugh at General Landry. Then to end it with Elizabeth's mom. Perfect. SPARKY heavenly fan fiction. Totally hooked on your story. I am going to have to give it a 10.
Oh my gosh this story is incredible but please promise me someone is going to kill that monster. I don't know how Elizabeth had so much will power. I would have blown the b away for what he did to John. Great job on John's thoughts and feelings.
Author's Response: Thanks! I wasn't sure what to do with Elizabeth there but felt that killing him just wouldn't stay true to her character! :D
Oh Heavens, don't leave us here. I can't wait till you update. I love Weir putting Ellis in his place. No one does a better job of that than Elizabeth. Hurry Save John!!! He needs to know Elizabeth loves him.
Author's Response: I agree! I miss her so much on the show :(
Thank you for another excellent chapter. It was great to see Elizabeth giving orders again. Woolsey has never been a believable commander. A terrible decision from tptb. Atlantis only truly works with Dr. Weir as it's leader. Looking forward to the next installment.
Author's Response: Yeah, I agree, I have no idea what they were thinking!
Wonderful to have 100% HUMAN Elizabeth back. I truly enjoyed Chapter 4. I think this may be one of my favorite
finding Elizabeth stories. Fantastic scene in her old quarters.
Author's Response: Thank you! I really wanted to get some Sparky scenes in there!
Thanks for bringing back the real love of John's life. I am truly enjoying your story. Looking forward to Chapter 4.
Author's Response: You're welcome! I loved bringing her her back! :)
I wanted to thank you for the great news. You are going to bring my favorite SGA expedition member back. Thank you so much. SPARKY is my favorite TV couple ever. They are just so beautiful to watch.
Author's Response: Yeah, I have to agree with you there! She was so amazing and the two of them together were even better!
I am a little disappointed I wanted the original Elizabeth to return not Fran. I
never could get used to anyone else as the beautiful, brilliant, and brave Dr. Weir.
Author's Response: No, I could never get used to Fran either, but she won't be around for much longer!
Great start to your fic! I can't wait to read how John saves Elizabeth. Keep up the good work! :)
Author's Response: Thanks! The next update should come soon! :)
I love the first chapter. You write so well. I can feel John's pain and loss.
I enjoyed Mrs. Wier. You did a wonderful job bringing her to life. She was so much like her amazing daughter. Please update soon.
Author's Response: Thanks! I tried to keep Mrs Weir as similar as possible to her brief appearance on the show. Glad you enjoyed it! :)
Great start! I cant wait to see where this is going!. Please update soon!. =)
Author's Response: I will! Glad you like it! :)
I like this and keep it going. I am enjoying the first chaper.
Author's Response: Thanks, the next chapter should be up soon!