Wow, can't see Carson or Elizabeth ever racing like that, but it's cool the spin you've put on their characters, like you've proved being out there for five years would change them.
Love the fact you've brought Hailey into it, she fits perfectly in the story.
Keep writing, I'm desperate to know what happens next!

Author's Response: Thanks. And, yeah, Carson and Elizabeth are a little bit more gung-ho but that's to be expected after five years in Pegasus. Great to know that you liked it.