I've just sat and read the entire story so far and all I can say is: Wow. I love your descriptions of both action and emotions, and the progressing relationship between John and Elizabeth was handled wonderfully.
Quite scared for poor Lizzie in these last few chapters - keep up the awesome writing!
Author's Response: Thanks. This started out as just a thousand or so words... I never intended it to run this long.
Aww...poor Lizzie (((hugs))) ....this is getting SO GOOD! But SOOO suspensful....
*glares and throws things at evil Garron* I dont like him!
Fantastic chapter please update soon!
great chapter! I'm loving this story! i hope john finds her soon though. update soon :)
great chapter. I hope John and the team catch up soon. I like the way Elizabeth and Katz have become friends. I like him, he's a great character
Author's Response: I wantd to get some 'nice' original characters in there, That's why I came up with him, along with Elizabeth's brother and niece.
